12 Oct 2021

Tell the running mind

Tell the running mind

Don't be quick

Tell someone to my mind

At one time ran at the speed of a bicycle

Nowadays it is running at the speed of bullets

Its speed may increase over time

Blood flesh bones

At an irreplaceable speed

The mind keeps running

The place where the body is standing is far away

The body and mind lose the point of intersection

Those who know how to suffer at an alien point

Telling the mind

Tell him to stop speeding now

In the long run is to find and bring the body

Don't run over it

Tell someone with a running mind

That axis is important for the running wheel

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2 comments:

  1. "the body and mind lose the point of intersection"
    This is inevitable fact

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    1. Heartfelt thanks for your feedback. Your personal comments on the poem are also relevant. I have made changes based on that. It is commendable that you read poetry in depth. I express my delight and gratitude.

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